Robbie,
I have added some comments to each of the posts you have made so far - I am aware that you ran into some problems and lost some work and I feel that you should make some amendments in some areas to improve on your work. Currently the work you are producing for your research and planning would achieve around the 12/13 out of 20 area so there is definite room for improvement. Considering how much you have caught up, I think that is a very good achievement.
Your analysis work is very good and detailed - please make sure that you double check all spelling and grammar and terminology in your work. I have added a comment to one where you use the term 'drop quote' and I think you mean pull quote. Make sure you use capital letters when needed and double check spelling. In one analysis, you mention Dyer's star theory and you have spelt Dyer as Dire. Double check this before considering this complete.
One other thing - you are 1 contents page analysis short - you need to get his completed ASAP.
Your mood boards (font, colour, target audience and advertisers) will need some brief analysis to go along with them. You should relate this to your target audience and discuss how your mood boards relate to and reflect your target audience.
For your planning work you are also missing your initial ideas statement as well. You may well have completed this and if you have, it just needs to be embedded into your blog. Please get this completed ASAP.
Ensure that all changes and outstanding work is completed over the Xmas holidays.
You practical work is coming on really well and you are producing some good design work. You must aim to complete a draft of each of the 3 products by the end of term so they can be assessed for feedback.
Carl.
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